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Wednesday, 17 June 2020

Choose It Narrative || Test



Once upon a time there lived a little girl named Layla, she was a pretty normal girl who always loved dragons, she would sometimes wear her favorite hoodie that had a photograph of a dragon on it, some called her mad and some called her ridiculous but she never really minded. One day well-taking puff her dog that had an always puffed when sneezing for a walk she questioned to herself where dragons lived, she couldn’t imagine of anything better but to see a real-life dragon, after walking puff she stepped outside to water her roses they were the most beautiful flowers you would ever imagine, they were a rich red color, securing in the daylight. 

After watering her rose she put the water bucket down and rested on the green grass. Well gawking at the sky for a minute she shut her eyes, then WOOS a huge drake shadow caved her light she couldn't feel the nice light reflecting on her she gently opened her eyes, being exhausted she was shocked flying beyond her was a blue and red dragon it was the greatest dragon your world would ever see. she hurried out the garden where she was resting in, ran through the door then sped to Mrs norman's house, as she was puffing and huffing and thought she was dreaming she tapped on the door and yelled out “MRS NORMAN, MRS NORMAN” out came Mrs. Norman “oh my poor dear what’s the matter, has something happened” the out came a “WHAT’S GOING ON HERE” behind Mrs. Norman was Mr. Buckentin. He was the oldest and scariest man in the fairytale kingdom. 

Everyone was scared of Mr. Buckentin; he wore a hat that was as big as a cattle, he had a long rough nose that was never hard to see and he always wore his scarf. Layla shut well puffing to Mrs. Norman “I SAW A DRAGON, I SAW A DRAGON” no one believed in Layla, but as soon as Mr. Bukentin heard what Layla said his eyes want wide so wide it looked like it was going to pop out, Layla ran telling Mrs. Norman and Mr. Buckentin to follow her, they ran to Layla’s small cottage, then heard a loud “WOOF WOOF” they rushed to the back yard and BAM a dragon and been sleeping in Layla’s back yard the whole time. Puff the dog couldn’t stop barking at the poof dragon, Mr. Buckentin and Mrs. Norman couldn’t believe their eyes and Layla just wore a BIG smile. 

Then out of nowhere Mr. Buckentin pulled out a long stick and started poking it the dragon was having it and started swiping its tale, Mr. Bukentin soon started whistling to it the dragon stared slowing down and couldn’t start moving it was like it was paralyzed Layla shut “STOP YOUR HURTING IT” he wouldn’t listen to Layla. Soon when the sun was going down Mr. Buckentin got his phone from the back pocket and called someone ten minutes after the call a lot of men had come down to Layla's house and took the dragon in reward Mr. Buckentin got 100,000 casts Layla couldn’t believe what just happened Mr. Buckentin chuckled and said “you silly girl I had been casing dragon’s down for years now thanks to you I’ve finally found one” and walked away smiling. 


Mrs. Norman was shocked at what happened and was scared that something could have happened to the poor dragon, Layla and Mrs. Norman teamed up and want saving the dragon they followed the van that took the dragon to an unknown location, there were so many bodyguards outside the cell where they had captured many dragons that said Layla and Mrs. Norman saw too bodyguards having a disagreement than BAM!?! They wore a long black suit and went inside, they saw a map of the whole-cell house and wanted to search for the control room as luck had it they were right next to it on one was it so they opened all the dragon’s cells and looking at the camera all the dragons escaped. They ran outside and saw all the dragons flying around one of them and saw Layla then laid his head on the ground soon all the dragons did it and that was the day Layla became the leader of the dragons. THE END

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Tatia,I really enjoyed reading your story and I liked how you choose the dragan picture and came up with a really good story under 45 minutes.I really like the names in this story it suits the peoples personalty.Your story has really good nouns and descriptive words.How did you come up with this story?

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