yesterday in class we had to write about war , but we couldn’t use the letter u so this is what i came up with ...
The sky filled with darkness as the war keep going will trees and grass getting on fire as people splash all over the place with there weapons held high as smoke fills the air and tanks drive all over the place as war keep’s going we will not know what happens
Hi Tatia,
ReplyDeleteI'm Mika from Yaldhurst Model School. Your story is starting off good. I like the sentence "their weapons held high as smoke fills the air".
You may need to cheack some punctuation in the first paragraph (I'm not talking about the quick write, there will be mistakes in a quick write).
What do you enjoy writing about? I enjoy writing about medival fantasy stories. I hope to see a reply.
By Mika
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